The wording gave me chills. I really, really loved the idea of personifying the two sides of Alice, thus expressing the two sides of Wonderland. Keep up the excellent work!

o, dark and evil. i like it! ]

i love, love, LOVE the last stanza. it pulls the while poem together in just a few short sentences and with incredibly words. i like how you described the Alice the Dark as insane ]

i also really like the imagery in the first few paragraphs. it's clear, but also left up to your imagination. i like the way you repeated the first two lines as well, because it strengthens the fact that Alice the Light and Alice the Dark are indeed the same person.

i really like this one ] great job!

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