Reviews for Our Christmastree is Fake
DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
first off, the imagery is excellent! it gives the reader a clear picture of the tree and the ornaments that hang on it. the creativeness of them and the meaning behind them. i liked that.

i liked the end too. it gives the feeling that this boy wants so much more than what he can have but he's going to try to get it anyways, no matter what it takes. the whole story has a sad, depressing tone to it, accentuating the feelings of this boy. nice job with that.

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fatbird33 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
i really liked this story. i can't really pinpoint why...

the descriptions were amazing and i could literally picture the tree and i liked that it stood a metaphor. i myself have a fake christmas tree, but that's just because my family's allerigic to trees:P

but really well written and good ending.