Reviews for My own world of missed opportunity
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
I love the rhyme "immunity" and "opportunity". It helped your poem not sound as if you just slapped a second line down to rhyme with the first one, if you know what I mean:) I would have taken "own" out of the second-to-last line though, to improve the flow. Too many syllables.

Great job!

Write on!