Reviews for I don’t want you to see how dirty this made me
Aniette chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
*smiles, feels at the same time*

You impress me.
lovelaced chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
honestly, I started reading some of your poetry and the first thought that popped into my mind was, "why the hell haven't I favorited her yet?" haha! Did you think it was going to be something bad? Okay sorry...

Anyway, you have every damn right to like this poem a lot. I love it. I relate to it and I wish I didn't, but I do.

"but most of all I don’t want you to, suit me.

and turn out to be the boy, I’ve been looking for this whole time.

because upon which I would have to immediately respond by:

sucking down the last of my vodka, and fucking another boy.

or, curling myself in at the foot of your bed with a journal

scribbling madly at it for hours, or until sun up.

(evidence would suggest)"

This is all too true for me. I have sabotaged some relationships, because I'm scared that they're the right guy for me.

Great job!

-Steph (sorry this was so long!)
Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I liked the word choice you used throughout this piece. It fit the theme well.

I also liked the voice you gave the narrator of the poem. Very quirky and interesting.

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