|Reviews for The Chemistry of Study Hall|
| Life As A Shadow chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
Damn I wish I had study hall.
Maybe if I quit band... Yeah, that sounds good.
| Cecilia A chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I like it. Very well done, paints a pretty good picture of the class. One thing I would change though, is keep the last line to form. Instead of 'Thus ends study hall.' I'd keep it 'This is study hall.' it seems more circular, more like there will be more even though you've said your piece. More natural.
Well done. :)
| Sercus Kaynine chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
I love this cute idea. It's something everyone can relate to. :)
I also liked the way you formed the stanzas because it was organized.
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