Love it! Update update update! Everyone always loves the dark sexy guy more than anything. I want more! :)

please! write more! Darrien is sooo unbelievably sexy. and Fae sounds just as sexy!~ they will make a greatttt couple nd i hope they go on sum sort of journey together (:

Update please, I'm dying to know what comes next

Wow...talk about passion... :P Very well written. Although there were some grammar mistakes. One of them was in the love scene when she takes her hands and wraps them around his neck, you wrote takes "her heads out of his and wrapped them around his neck." Second one was when you wrote that the colours of their eyes went from gold back to their trademark colours...colours was repeated twice. So it was written as "trademark colours colours." Yeah, other than that, very very, very captivating, well written, and creative! :D

Wow...could this get any sexier? :P Darrien definitely sounds so much more realistic to me now, and so does Fae. You are bringing your story to life in my mind, well done! :D

Update soon :)

i'm practically shaking with anticipation. when is the next updated. i love it so much that i cant wait. althought i don't really understand the name thing, does it mean he naturally knows her full name or she has to tell him?

This story is pretty good so far! I checked when you last updated but i am seriously confused because it says you last updated around four months into the future... it hasnt ben that date yet ? I dont know what you were talking about in your a/n in the first chapter but i managed to stay interested in the story the whole time. Update soon!

again, again!

:) haha what an unpredictably hot dude darrien

I lovelovelove this story and I really hope you update it soon! I think the plot and characters are so different from other things I've seen or read and it makes me really happy!

Wow, I love this story. Good work.

Beautiful story! Pretty interesting characters you have too. I definitely like how the plot is going right now. I'm looking forward to upcoming chapters!

Whew! Dang! That was AWESOME! Loved it! Keep writing!

You did amazing! I absolutley cannot wait for the next chapter to be up! Please keep writing more soon!

Good so far... I know you have the story all planned out in your head, but we as the readers don't know the details... Try trhowing them in every once and a while to make the reading smoother and easier to follow. I know you're trying hard not to rush the story, but what would help is a thesaurus and some extra details about your settings, try tossing in some Tone too. Keep up the nice work! The story really does have potential.