This was one of the best stories I've read in a while. I'm dead serious. Even the one I'm reading that has been published was less interesting than this. You have talent! I know this was put on this site a year ago, but I felt the need to review and tell you what a magnificent job you did on this! I almost cried at the end and I seriously hope I can read more stories like this one in the future. Awesome job!

It's sad that this is how the world is underneath the masks we put up. We are all barbarians under our morals.