Loved this. 2009 feels so far away...

I think this is totally underrated! It’s a game that it’s likely not going to be continued, as I really, really enjoyed it! I think this story is one I’ll be coming back to a lot!

A lot of the characters admittedly fell into cliches, but you did it so well that I literally love them all (not that I usually mind cliches that much in the first place). Yui is just... so great. I love everything about her, from the way she bemoans her situation to the way she gets so flustered to even the way she’ll think about how cute a girl is~

Anyways, I hope that one day this story will be continued, but I’m sure I’ll be coming back either way:)

Hello. Your story is really funny and beautiful. Every chapter makes me look forward to the next. It is well thought out and every new character makes the story even more interesting and exciting.

Hey, love the comedy of your story. It really does feel like a manga (even though there are no pictures). Reading through all your chapters in one go, it was amazing to see the evolution of your writing over the years. You've really improved since your early chapters.

I would love to see more chapters. If you don't feel like continuing the story, would you please post a summary detailing who she eventually ends up with (my gut feeling is Kaito), and how it happened (what situation drove the conclusion in that direction)? That way, if you ever feel inspired and have the time to continue writing the story, us, your fans, would have something to tide us over if/when that time comes.

Again, congrats on to getting the story to 81 chapters. That was a LOT of effort and dedication on your part. Thanks for sharing your story with us, in the first place. We would have been deprived of laughter if you decided to keep it to yourself, on your laptop.

I just finished rereading this story... Please update soon ;-; I mean I get that you're busy with college although 2 summers already passed but... Just please update soon because this is the best story in existence (I reviewed the first time when j read this story too if you want to read it.) I also think something is wrong with me because I imagined Coach Mori having a son that falls in love with Yui XD I must be going crazy, no thanks to this story lol. Anyway, once again, please update soon :)

No matter how many years pass, I think this will always be my favorite story on FP. It's both creative and uplifting and your writing style is inspirational to my own first-person tense.

Yui is the greatest. She gets iffy around the later chapters, with her indecisiveness, but I'd have to admit I'd be pretty hesitant too with all of those hot guys hitting on me.

Kaito and Akira are my favorite male characters. They're both just so sweet. Akira (and Dengeki Daisy) actually were my incentives to write One-One-Two-O'-One and I am not regretting it. Go delinquents! The fact that Kaito had that type of background, too, made me like him even more.

Aaah, there are so many good things about this story! I can't say enough about it. All I can say is... even if it's unfinished, it's worth a read. Or two. Or three, in my case.

This will forever be my favourite story. I believe that the most tragic event to occur in history was in fact the (assumed) discontinuation of this amazingness

-Imi :)

This was definitely the most beautiful and amazing story I have EVER read. Have you read/watched Hana Kimi by any chance? I just see loads of similar aspects in this... BTW AMAZING STORY OF AMAZINGNESS!

did u die
pls update

OK I HAVE LIKE 10000 THINGS TO SAY
FIRST OF ALL: OH MY GODS THIS IS A FREAKING AMAZING STORY ITS SO GOOOOOD
SECOND: I AM SO CONFUSED BY THIS CHAPTER JUST GONNA GO BACK AND READ IT BUT ITS STILL AWESOME :D
THIRD: I THINK THIS STORY MIGHT BE MESSING UP MY SANITY (not that i had any in the first place) BUT CARRY ON, INSANE IS MY 8TH MIDDLE NAME XD
FOURTH: IM A PRETTY HARD YUITO (YUI X KAITO) SHIPPER BUT THE OTHER SHIPS ARE SO FUNNY TO READ AND OCCASIONALLY ADORABLE :3
FIFTH: AT FIRST I DIDNT REALIZE HOW COMPLICATED THIS STORY WAS UNTIL I TRIED TO EXPLAIN IT TO MY FRIEND
SIXTH: NOW I REALIZE
SEVENTH: UHHH I REALLY DIDNT THINK THIS THRU DID I
EIGHT: THINK IM GONNA HAVE TO SETTLE WITH 10 INSTEAD OF 10000
NINTH: JUST IN CASE I DIDNT MAKE IT CLEAR, UR AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
TENTH: WELL THATS THEN, UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPPIE!

-Ro :)

Wow...I kind of feel bad for Yui. I love Yuuki, can I keep him? I love adorable demon boys that can melt my heart with a blink of an eye!

Amazing story- best ever. You should look into getting this published! Please please please updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate sooooooooooon!

I feel... slightly murderous...
Not because of you... well... it IS partly your fault... but...
Okay, I want to murder Shouta because he interrupted Yui when she was about to tell Kaito. I legit said out loud when Shouta came in, "You have 5 seconds to time travel to before you came in, before I take out your intestines, while you still breathe and hang you by the neck with it as I watch you die choking on your own guts... be grateful its not quick..." (funny story: I said that and my cousin came in... he walked right back out...) and no that's not the influence of your story, I just have violent friends... then again... I'm violent so... if you need help with any torture shizz, I'm open if you need inspiration :)
Also, out of all the guys, my favourite would have to be... Akira, because a) he's hot and b) I have a thing for tough guys who have soft spots. Then followed closely by... Kaito, because he's also like Akira minus the illegalness of his... activities, and because I just LOVE him! And... I might be biased because I'm also a goalie in soccer :) Then it's Kazuo, coz his awkwardness is adorable! Then... Takumi-sempai... just because :)
When I first saw this, the only reason why I clicked on it was because it was about soccer and I just LOVE soccer and I also would do anything for my passion, I am so glad that I did! I might sound sadistic but I found it incredibly funny when I would read about Yui's uhm... "adventures" with her... 'suitors'.
I REALLY look forward to reading more and finding out about the airport shizz! :)
Noni
P.S. My favourite is still Akira :) just saying...

Best story ever I read one chapter then read the entire rest off it in 3 days. Most awsome story ever except now I'm depressed because I caught up and read anymore. Although I think sleeping till the next update might be a good idea;p

Ok, so first of all, you can write really well. It's easy to read, it's fun, it makes me quite addicted. But I don't know if I'll be able to read anything after this chapter.
I don't know what annoys me the most ; the fact that almost EVERY SINGLE GUY seems to be liking Yui, or the fact that she ACTUALLY likes almost every guy ? I mean, you make her seem so pretty and cool, she's a total Mary-Sue.
There are TONS of completely useless characters, they're just here to confuse her and be good-looking and make them like her. You talk a lot about "clichéd" situations, but your fiction is turning totally like that.
Yui can't say no to anyone because "ok maybe I like him a little", or because the person is making a cute face. In fact, half the situations in your fiction would be ok if they just happened once or twice, but you use them ALL THE TIME.
Besides it's just useless to make her like soooo freaking many guys since we all know she's gonna end up with Kaito. You're making this way too long.

I'm not trying to insult your work at all, it was just my opinion. I'm glad everyone doesn't share it, I can see your fiction is liked by a LOT of people, and I'm happy for you.