|Reviews for It's a boy! or is it a girl? What?|
| SecretHajimeno chapter 7 . 12/3/2010
I am loving this story so far! I am planning to write a similar story with a girl going to an all boys school. This is inspiring me. I was trying to think about how to write the conversion from girl to boy... but I like the way you did it. Very good story.
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 41 . 11/29/2010
After all, Yui is a g-" *Slaps Kazuo*
She hit her in the face with pie. That's classic. I think that's the most normal thing that has happened in the entire story. XD
"You could sell that video to hormonal teen-aged boys and make a fortune," ROFL!
"It's okay. Are you just now realizing that your view of reality has been destroyed by associating with me? Isn't it great? Everything is so much more interesting now, isn't it?" Funny, that's what my friend said to me not too long ago...
"So, what color are the bridesmaids dresses?" I asked quickly. "Blue." XD
Tell them that something suddenly came up and that you need to go home." That's the best excuse in the world...Something suddenly cane up! *Thinks of a Brady Bunch episode*
"You spaced out, so I sent it for you." O_O R.I.P. Yuuki.
"Don't do anything I wouldn't." LMAO! That's like a crack addict saying, "Don't smoke anymore of that stuff than I would." XD
This was an awesome chapter! Who would've thought Yui would be famous? ;P
I'm finally caught up and I plan on STAYING caught up!
| MissNightOwl chapter 2 . 11/28/2010
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 40 . 11/28/2010
"Nothing. I usually go for the tall, muscular ones, but you're pretty cute, too," LMAO! Another fan!
Okay, I should probably start hitting him… But the candy! LOL! Michi is the stranger with the candy and Yui is the little kid! XD
Ine? Oh, crud. Yes, crud. That sums this up perfectly. O.O GIRL FIGHT!
"Because they're a couple." *Punches Ine in face*
I'm going to start crying… or mauling people. I like that second option better, much better. Run for your lives! RUN, I TELL YOU! RUN!
He held up a small bag in his hand; it was filled with sweets. WHOA! He really IS the stranger with the candy! _
These things are really addictive. Haha! Cupcakes are her crack! XD
Now, if Ine mysteriously disappears, we'll know what happened. Oh, well. I highly doubt anyone will miss her.
"Yes! I'm fine! In fact, I'm wonderful! I'm fine! Good! What? Sugar! Hey, look, a bird! It's so pretty! Aww… It left! I want to want to eat it! Come back, birdie! No! I ate all of my cupcake! Good thing I still have candy. Candy! Kaito, you're really comfortable. Do you like candy? It's almost as good as soccer. Soccer is better, but it doesn't taste as good." O_O Holy crap! She's high!
I leaned forward, and pressed my lips softly to his. WOO! GO YUI!
What? He can't take my life source away! I need it! I wonder if I'm addicted. Nah, can't be. Give me that candy! I feel like she's going to rip Shiro's head off if he doesn't give her that candy...
I wonder what Yui thinks of the movie Willy Wonka... XD
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 39 . 11/28/2010
He bent down closer to me, "Is that all I am?" *Fangirl squeal*
I had woken up from an extremely disturbing dream involving me getting chased by hordes of Takumi sempai's with blue skin wearing tutus while Yuuki, who was as tall as a building, took pictures. Kaito was driving a giant furless mole rat, and offering to give me a ride; Kazuo was playing soccer with the sun; Ine and Megumi were chasing me with chainsaws, fighting over which half of me they would get, and Shiro was watching everything emotionlessly, and he had a tail. Hahahahahahahaha! I love how you topped it all of with, "And he had a tail." XD
She told me that she'd rip off my arms and then beat me with them if she saw me again." Poor Shiro...
Shiro said, sounding vaguely puzzled, like my behavior was something that he would like to study. Hahaha I can picture Shiro following Yui around with a notebook and pen.
"I'm not at liberty to discuss that." LOL! Shiro's a freaking alien!
Then, I felt my towel slipping. O_O That world is totally and absolutely against her.
"Your life is really messed up." ...HUGE UNDERSTATEMENT!
This chapter has quite possibly made my brain nearly as messed up as Yui's. O_o Wow, that's not good. lol XD
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 38 . 11/28/2010
"Yui… Ine wasn't watching. When I walked through the lobby, I saw her come in from outside, presumably after talking to you, and then she walked down one of the halls. She didn't even look back." Hahahaha Shiro likes Yui!
I got up off of the rocky ledge that I had been sitting on and hugged him from behind, wrapping my arms around his torso. Unfortunately, since everything I do backfires, Takumi sempai had been standing on the edge of the tidal pool, and my added weight tipped him over the edge. We fell into the water with an enormous splash, and came up coughing. HA! For a minute I was like, "AW! That's sweet! ." Than I was like, "Of course. Nothing ever goes right for Yui, so why would this be any exception?"
"Does that mean that I get to hug you everyday?" Dangit! You did it now, Yui!
"Earlier when we were playing soccer and we… kissed, it… Argh! You're a boy! But it felt… nice." LMAO! Poor dude, he must think he's gay right now. XD
"Kazuo… I'm a girl." HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP! AGH! I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE JUST SAID THAT! :O
Kazuo's eyes became as big as turkey platters. Hahaha I bet they did. XD
What – bang – have – whack – I – bang – done – slam – to - crack – deserve – this? Whap! Yui! You're going to give yourself MORE brain damage!
"Yui? I was wondering… Can I take some pictures of you? I'm taking a photography class, and I need someone to model for me," LIES!
"No way! Getting a picture of you as a girl? I am so not deleting that," Why do I get the feeling this picture will be the end of her?
Wow, poor poor poor Yui. lol XD
| MissNightOwl chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
That...was...very...HILARIOUS! COMPLETELY AWESOME! *VIRTUAL HIGHFIVE*
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 37 . 11/27/2010
I am going to sew her into a straight jacket made from her own creations; then I am going to tack her up on the side of a building so that the crows can eat her internal organs day after day! ...I don't really blame her. That's what I'd do.
She's the type of person who would keep me locked up in her room so she could have me all to herself. Creepy. That's more than creepy. O.o
He… We… kissed? No, that can't count! It was an accident; he couldn't stop his momentum, that's all. Wah! We kissed! What do I do? Well, at least Yui really is a girl instead of a guy.
"After I get ice cream?" I knew I sounded like a child, but I really wanted that ice cream. Psh, if I had her life I'd be scarfing down 2 cartons of ice cream a day!
Why does it sound like she's warning him, and more importantly, why is Michi staring at me like a side of beef? Haha I think she has another fan. XD
"Oh, you mean, why is Shiro here? He's my brother." ROFL! XD
Having her at my heels was more alarming than having a pack of rabid hell hounds after me, starving hell hounds that had a craving for human flesh. Dang, that's pretty bad.
Gosh, Yui has been traumatized beyond belief. :O lol good chapter. :)
I'll be trying to catch up this week while reviewing every chapter.
You just keep up the good work!
| mmmbopjonasgirl chapter 36 . 11/27/2010
Wow, I haven't been R&Ring, now, have I? I feel so, so...unfaithful. :( But I'm really sorry! Anyway, now for my review!
As the cobwebs of sleep drifted away from my brain, I realized that my "pillow" had a heartbeat. Don't all pillows?
Evil munchkin! ROFL XD
That means that Kaito will bunk with Takumi sempai." Hahahahaha! I'd pay to see that!
"Why? I saw you when I knocked you into the bathtub and were wearing that wet T-shirt. It fit you like a second skin… leaving very little to the imagination." Haha Poor Yui. :P
No, this can't be happening. I have… fan-boys? I feel so disturbed right now. Bwahahaha Her life is slowly being ruined, I can feel it.
"You're a bishonen… So cute!" LMFAO!
Hell! Crazy stalker maid alert. Run for your life!
"I'm tired. Yui, if you want to play hanky-panky with a girl, wait until I'm not here. Now go to bed!" Wow, Yui sure owes him a lot.
Great great great chapter! :D
Ine is...Ine is...just about as nuts as I am. XD Only I don't go for the bishonen guys. Err, well, I do have a thing for the guys on Ouran...lol
Once again, I am SO SO SO sorry I haven't been reviewing! I've been so dang busy and just now found the time to be able to sit down and read anything. But you really are doing a great job with this story. :D
| meimei11 chapter 41 . 11/24/2010
I soo agree with you, Michi is scary... like super. Last time when I meat a creep, I totally smacked them hard on the face and ran like hell was creeping over me with chainsaws made for very specific things. It gave me goose-bumps for 3 days!
Oh and dont worry, no one's too old for trick or treating, I still do it until now and at school, we do candy hunts! Its awesome.
About the latest chapter, totally awesome and cool. Of course, Yuuki is still awesome. Woohoo for secret places to get info from! I totally support those groups (mainly because I get info from them) Yui is good in acting dumb. Haha. SHe totally fooled Kaito! Haru is scary... and perverted! Good thing Yuuki was there! Go go Yuuki!
Conclusion of all the rants and stuff I have said: AWESOME CHAPTER!
Please keep going on and be more confident You're a great writer Update soon!
| Katojiku chapter 41 . 11/22/2010
xDD i loved this chapter!
sorry about the last review. I know I wrote more but "m, sugar" was all that showed up! DD
| silverspigot chapter 41 . 11/21/2010
I don't like this chapter as much as the last one (I mean, what could be better than Yui on a sugar high!), but it was still great! On the computer-missing note, I too was kept away from ze computer for a week. It was HORRIBLE! And I wonder what will happen next...
| bkpatt27 chapter 41 . 11/21/2010
thank you maika!we should start a ramen club and fyi, i'm only kind of stalking you, duh! _ yup, i can't wait for this to come out, ne! have you heard of Hana Kimi? it's a manga that is similar to this. i wonder what's going to happen to yui? duhnduhnduhn! thank you, you just made my month!
Feedback on actual chapter: LOVE IT! YUIKAITO all the way. the way you end chapters and add so much drama is wonderful.
what do the judges say?
Wootwoot, we have a winner!
| Gator-aide chapter 41 . 11/21/2010
I have to say I've been reading this for the past two days and after thinking for a while I became steadily disappointed in this story. Whilst it had great comedy and cute fluff it's just not realistic enough to seem like these events are really happening to Yui. It's very far-fetched. There are a lot of gaps in Yui's character. You also seem to be down playing the realistic features of the situation steadily as the chapters go on. This was one of the aspects of the story I liked. Even when she got chased by fan girls you made it seem like it could happen. Now, not so much. It's getting a little hard to stay interested.
Keep it up and thanks for posting! I look forward to your next chapters!
| SweetlilSunshine chapter 41 . 11/20/2010
that sounded exactly like yuki would say lol, maybe u should have one of the creepier characters write a story about her every move.