Reviews for Forget Me Nots |
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![]() ![]() ![]() No update in a year, but is till reallyyy realyy reallllllyyyyyyyyyyy hope there will be a new chapter soon, i absolutely loveeee this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks really cute so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing! I couldn't stop reading it :) hope to see a new chaper put up soon... I can't stop wondering whar Luke and Christopher were fighting about and how they are going to end up :D anyways update soon pleaaaassssssssseeeeeee! |
![]() ![]() Oh dear sweet Jesus. I've spent the last 2 hours and 13 minutes reading the first 20 chapters, oblivious to everything around at the Starbucks or even the music from the headphones...that is how completely mesmerised I have been with these two wonderful characters. Luke is so wonderfully flawed and vulnerable and Christopher is just perfection. I want them both! Lol. You have such wonderful flow to your writing and you're dialogue is perfection. I'm so surprised that you don't have a strong female foil character a " fag hag" as it were for one of them to play off of. I know it's a bit stereotypical but it still very true to form for almost every gay guy I know, there's the strong girl behind him. Not that it ties anything away from the story I just find it peculiar is all. Maybe I'm just biased. :). But still I loved it. I'm so torn between loving Luke and his "Seattle ways" even though they are over with. (they are aren't they?). And Christopher is so wonderful drawn and crafted. I wish they would hurry up and get the login fixed so I can favourite and follow this story instead of having to check back. Lol. Until then just know I'm waiting ever so patiently for both stories to update. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the dynamic between all of the characters I love how Kenny sees what Luke is doing and I love the emotion he eminates for Tyler. The whole symphony of events is beautiful. At first I didn't like the two different times, but it really works well. Gorgeous work, my dear. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the dynamic between all of the characters I love how Kenny sees what Luke is doing and I love the emotion he eminates for Tyler. The whole symphony of events is beautiful. At first I didn't like the two different times, but it really works well. Gorgeous work, my dear. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute, I'm just sitting in bed squeeing! The plotline is just fabulous and leaves me wanting more, and this is written in such a way that makes people addicts. Please Please Please write another chapter soon XD Love love love |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG I LOVE LUKE HE'S SO ADORABLE - -coughcough- A-anyway... Luke sounds like he's VERY pretty. But, then again, I am a SUCKER for blue eyes. Christopher's not shabby, either. ;P Mm. Smexeh. TOO BAD THEY'RE GAY. T-T |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh they had a moment! If Luke has trouble getting his memory back, maybe Christopher can make Luke fall in love again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this because I thought it was going to be a light funny story since you said it was romance/humor but it is actually quite serious. Not that that is bad or anything, just not what I expected. I hope Tyler comes out okay in this one. We know that Christopher and Luke get together somewhere but hopefully that isn't at the expense of Tyler. And wasn't Luke supposed to be behaving? He has such an odd coping mechanism. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter as per normal. There aren't any spaces between the paragraphs; you might want to fix that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol loved it! cant wait for next chapter! update asap! |
![]() ![]() damn this is soo good, please write more and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol love it! great story! dont listen to what the other people say, it will be alot better if you write it exactly how you want to! they dont know how you want the sroty to turn out :) anyway update asap! |