Reviews for Fourteen Months & Two Days
Boo chapter 2 . 4/24/2010
personally I find it really good!

love it
Agony of the Heart chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
Floppy125 chapter 2 . 1/21/2010
Aw! What a nice story! I loved de way you described jake's situation (the dreams, etc)
schoeppc chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
Wonderful story! You really did an amazing job.
I Murder on Impulse chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
I love the story!


readernotwriter1 chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
this was really good. but i felt that it ended really abruptly.

now i feel sorry for those people out there fighting in the war. or any war for that matter.
checkyesdana chapter 2 . 1/13/2010
i love this. so so cute
jekodama chapter 2 . 12/28/2009

As always, your writing hooks me up from the very start.

The PTS thing has been a bit overused in other stories, but I like how you sort of downplayed it to favor character interactions, instead of focusing on it. I also liked that, even though it is a two-shot, the characters were well developed (though there was a bit of Mary Sue-ness in Jake's character).

Kudos, and Merry Christmas!
ChaoticBunny chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
This is truly an amazing piece of work. The story is very cute and wonderful. I simply love it. I love your writing style. You developed the story and, especially the chemistry, beautifully.
whysgirlfriend chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
omg great story i l
happiness.means.friends chapter 2 . 12/23/2009
aww this is adorable, very sweet and meaningful, nice work ;]
Robyn Night chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
I loved this story! Pretty damn good for having just come out of writers block hibernation! lol ;)

I like how you captured the mentality of a sodier in Jake, and I love how caring and understanding Kate is towards him. Definitely one of my favorites! :D
chng234 chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
this is sweet.
Raised with Fangs chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
aweman now I gotta wait! this story is awesome! its starting to make me cry already! please please keep going!
dontneedyou chapter 2 . 12/22/2009

This is such a WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC, BEAUTIFUL, ADORABLE, WELL-WRITTEN two-shot. It's really something amazing. It's been a while since I've read something THIS good. Gaahh, I just love it so much, seriously. You're such a good writer!

This story put me in such a good mood, honestly! You must be incredibly talented to write something so wonderfully amazing. I LOVE THIS, LOVE THIS, LOVE THIS.

Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful story with everyone! ]

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