Loved this story so much! :D Andrew and Harleen are perfect for each other, they really are. I love how their relationship progressed and how protective he was over her. Nice job :)

Great story

Australian accent? Devil? Heheheheheheheheh

It's true.

*dun dun duh!*

For Merlin's underwear...
The end, THE END! It totally took my breathe away, she was like so going to die! Love it!

this is great so far

The only I want to ask is whether it's ymail or gmail - never heard of ymail. It sounds like a pretty fun thing to do so I will email you at ymail but just in case I decided to ask.
Thanks!

I am now picturing Andrew Garfield as the devil. But great story ;) Although I don't understand how Edgar just believed him.

what? No ANs? (I couldn't make a crooked smile(one edge of the lips raised right?))

I know you named the devil andrew for kicks, but his name is Lucifer.

Great Story! I really love all your works!

Cheers,
TQL

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Awesome story, awesome plot, awesome characters. It's a puddle of awesomeness. Great job in the story, it was soooo good and you're a really good writer.

Lol. I love the last line.

I just realized something earlier I said something about dont fall for the player that was the wrong story I meant until your mine.

One I love your story and two i know that song cath me by demi lovato write i hadnt been pqaying attention till chapter 4 saw that verse and was like wait a second this person has amazing taste in music. Anyway so great story your an amazing writer by the way i just fnished dont fall for the players it was amazing and this seems to be following in its foot steps