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Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Wonderful.

"I can no longer stand,

or sit,

or dance

to this shadow of this,

unrequitedness."

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i collect lullabies chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I love this whole thing, but I think my favorite part is "I can no longer stand/or sit/or dance/to this shadow of this/unrequitedness" because I relate to it a lot. Of course, I have no idea what you were thinking when you wrote this but to me, that section is what relates to me best.

good job. :)