|Reviews for A Friendship Past|
| Adriana chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
very poetic, i can very easily relate it to my life. you seem like you've had a good experience with this as your poem touched me greatly. :)
| RentBoheme chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Again, this is a well done poem. The only suggestion I would give is to try and have the same amount of syllables in each rhyming line. This was my favorite line: "It is long since I have wept / Our friendship remains ashes to be swept."