Reviews for Let Me Forgive You
writer-person-thingy chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
OH MY GOD! This perfectly describes the way I currently feel about someon! It's beautiful, and I imagined it getting angrier as time passed. But, that's just me, I'm not sure if that's what you intended. But I love your use of metaphors, like "If I can't release this boulder it'll drag me to hell..." That was genius! And I absolutely LOVED this verse,

"Being good will never change things, so I don’t bother to try

I swore I’d just stop caring but you still make me cry

Did you know that being like you is my greatest fear?

And you thought the same, but now I’m here"

That was absolutely fantastic! Great work! :)
nextcountrystar chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
This is beatiful it reminds me of my kinda best friend she says were friends then she ignores me I want to be friends with her but I hate trying to ignore her hurtful words and honestly I have recently gotten sick of dealing with it anyway my faveorite line was

"Talking about it only makes it worse"

Because I try to talk about it but it only makes it worse good job though I really love it
scripted chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Wow. Really good lyrics here.

Love the imagery and the emotion - really well done

You expressed the feeling exactly how it is felt, and with really good language.

"I know that hating is wrong

But loving just hurts"

Very, very true.

Congrats )

PS. (just gone through something like what you wrote about, so do have some advice if you need it. If not - just ignore the next bit .