Reviews for My Dinosaur King
PRETTY KITTY 500 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
NEATO POEM!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
At first I wondered if it was who you wished to be.. till the second to last line. the duality is very cool and just goes to show how different siblings can be and yet still get along. at least well enough to rule the world. Great poem.
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
From the first glance, I am already hopelessly in love with your title, it is socool! My Dinosaur King ...kya!

The contast in the poem is really nice. I also like the difference not only in term of opposite but rather of power. Like the winner over not-winner (I don't feel like using loser because no one is really a loser in life. Yep)

He runs around the village, making new friends;

I stay in my room all day, typing.

(LOL, I was like "AH Ha! you are typing this poem!") anyway random! _

"I pray for rain and gloominess and melancholic days."

(Love this phrase, I happen to like the rain too very much. This is lovely)

I find the last part totally ADORABLE

We both manipulate.

He is my brother; and I am his sister.

And together, we will conquer the entire universe.

(Ah, it makes me want to go hug my baby brother and yell "World Domination!") _

Really cute poem that shows the difference among siblings yet they are together.

Kalista Jia
Son Of Phoenix chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Well Written, i always loved the concept of duality. I liked this