This could be a read that would make girls want to punch the girls self-conscious face but you didn't make it like that at all it. It was an adorable read that had me smiling along, and kind of wishing I had my own Hunter! Amazing.

You are adorable and this was beautifully written. Perfect, believable and very very romantic.

to paraphrase agnes from despicable me ...it's so fluffy i'm gonna die! :) i want me a hunter of my own!

Hey! I am here to share some exciting news! This story was added to the One Shot category over on A Drop of Romeo!

Here's the review:

"Helen Thinks: I’m going to be honest with you all, I usually hate stories that state the heroine is ‘fat’ when actually it means she’s a beautiful healthy curvy size and I usually close it down, without reading any further. However, this isn’t the case for “Befuzzled” by Mailai and that’s because it’s not written in a whiney, I-hate-my-life kind of way but in a way that I bet ninety percent of the female population will be able to relate to.

In my opinion, the strength of this story is Mailai’s character building writing that will leave all writers green with envy. Jane, our protagonist, is like any other college student. She knows she’s not fat but at the same time, she knows she’s not perfect so often ponders on how she’s managed to find herself in bed with Hunter, the hottest guy on campus. Mailai hits the female emotion of never feeling good enough in a cute, comical way through the way Jane constantly worries that Hunter is only with her as a bet – because don’t we all have that fear at time? – even though he’s always there to tell her that’s not the reason.

Even though this story is slightly cliché, I believe Mailai has delivered it in such a fashion that you don’t even notice and has you falling in love with Hunter right alongside Jane. Trust me, you’re going to read this and wish there was a Hunter in your life – I know I was."

Keep writing,

Helen xo

Awesome story :)
It makes you believe that there is truly a person who'll love you for your all, despite you being your own worst enemy

GAWWW~ :'D I LOVE FLUFFINESS. :D

I adore squishiness. It's so... squishy... and... well, squishy. xD

Wow! I don't know if I have reviewed this before but I have comeback to it time and time again because I enjoy reading it so much and I am sure I will read it again sometime!

This story is so cute, and adorable.(: I wish you would continue it. Buuuuut, it's still awesome.(

I love how your writing is so realistic. You make your characters so believeable, and in this case, you have used a character who isn't the usual stick thin girl, but is outside of the norm and still gets the hot guy. I now feel all warm and fuzzy inside!

Aw... I actually teared up a little that was so sweet :) I really like your writing style by the way, its not rushed at all and thats a good thing :)

Cute :)

Yay for authors who write fluffy stuff! I liked it :D

Ah! i always wonder why us girls have so many insecurities, and we kind of almost everytime exagerate our flaws, i mean look at Jane, okay maybe i don't know how you imagined Jane in your head, but in my head, she's this gorgeous curvy girl, who might not have a complete flat stomache but isn't pudgy, if you know what i mean. She's beautiful, even beautiful than Stephanie who i imagine to be a tall, skinny, super-model type girl.

Is it something all girls go through, or are some of us realy blind LOL?

Like yesterday i was complaining that my eyes are this horrible shade of brown, one of my close male friend was like "why don't you see it as a very alluring shade of chocolate brown? because that's what it is?" It seems as others could see our beauty than us ourselves *sigh*. Us girls really are one confusing species LMAO.

Anywhoo! i can't believe i just rambled away here ROFL. Another amazing OS, i am in LOVE with Hunter, he really does sound like an Adonis, damn Jane is so LUCKY!, i wouldn't be cmplaining if he was in my bed LOL *blushing*.

I love love love this story!

You are my idol for writing it! :P

Hunter seems like a really good person and I'm really glad him and Jane are together (?)

Aw... for AWSOME!