Reviews for Games
Anon chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Well there were some very interesting twists in the story. I must say I really enjoyed that. You have a thing for the name Jonah don't you? lol Don't know who the quote is by but I will google it now! (:
Kayleigha chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
That was super cool. Different plot! Loved it hehe! And, the quote: Veronica Mars? Haha maybe?

Kayleigha
whitecrayons chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
aww cute!

-squeals-
victoriai434 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
um.. I'd very much like me some brownie points, so I'm going to go with Veronica Mars?

pleasesayyes pleasesayyes pleasesayyes

also.. I liked the story a lot

I like all of your stories A LOT!

keep it up! :D
Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hey, this is quite good! (I also have a love/hate relationship with cliches, btw...)

Nice dialogue and the story has a nice, quick pace to it. The only suggestion I can make is maybe work on some transitions between sections.

Otherwise, great work! Kudos! -CD
JoiZ. D chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Wow. This is really awesome! I can't exactly say how, but it has a certain charm to it. :)

Good job! Infinity stars!
XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hey... Great story...! To bad there was no romance... But ANYWAYS Great story as I said! Keep on writing;)
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