|Reviews for Games|
| Anon chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
Well there were some very interesting twists in the story. I must say I really enjoyed that. You have a thing for the name Jonah don't you? lol Don't know who the quote is by but I will google it now! (:
| Kayleigha chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
That was super cool. Different plot! Loved it hehe! And, the quote: Veronica Mars? Haha maybe?
| whitecrayons chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
| victoriai434 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
um.. I'd very much like me some brownie points, so I'm going to go with Veronica Mars?
pleasesayyes pleasesayyes pleasesayyes
also.. I liked the story a lot
I like all of your stories A LOT!
keep it up! :D
| Captain-Dalien chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hey, this is quite good! (I also have a love/hate relationship with cliches, btw...)
Nice dialogue and the story has a nice, quick pace to it. The only suggestion I can make is maybe work on some transitions between sections.
Otherwise, great work! Kudos! -CD
| JoiZ. D chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Wow. This is really awesome! I can't exactly say how, but it has a certain charm to it. :)
Good job! Infinity stars!
| XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Hey... Great story...! To bad there was no romance... But ANYWAYS Great story as I said! Keep on writing;)