Reviews for Beautifully |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this and was really amazed It was really beautiful. I figured the guy was gay haha. I think it's a good thing he decided to live without having to lie anymore :) It hurt her but I think it would have hurt more if they stayed together like that. Love can be so difficult haha. Anyways, I enjoyed it Love your work as always. Cant wait for next chapter of Step Outside :P Just love that story Merry Christmas to you! Happy Holidays. PS. I love how it was written in the guys POV. I think its better in first person than to have it in third person :D It was a little bit confusing but that's how love is isn't it? -Neener (Arashiku) Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No pun intended, but beautifully written. I'm a little confused though, I kinda feel like I know what's going on, but then I'm just like, it could just be my view and not really what you wanted to show. But I really do like this piece. It's heartbreaking, but at the same time endearing. I really do like it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...that was so sad. It sucks that she was so in love with him but he could never return those feelings...I think it was breaking both of their hearts. Oh, and though I am sad you deleted Say it Like a Lie, I'm so glad you're continuing Step Outside! |