Reviews for Avoiding Commitment
Fierce.Imagination chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
So I know this story’s been out for a while and has a sequel already, so reviews aren’t very relevant anymore, but I figured feedback is always welcomed (even with 130 reviews)…

I really want to catch up and read the sequel while it’s still being updated, but I have to read this story first, so that’s what I’m doing XD.

I love your style of writing and I found myself thinking about the story after finishing the first chapter, which doesn’t happen often. So far it looks like an original idea and the descriptions are great, so I’m really looking forward to reading on.

By the way, this Jack guy has to one of the most egoistic people (or characters) I’ve heard of! Shameless too… I still don’t get what was the emergency that couldn’t wait until a reasonable hour of the day, but whatever.

So I’ll stop ranting now, I’ll go read another chapter instead.
WyldeLoneStar chapter 25 . 9/16/2010 glad she finally kicked Jack to the curb, but poor Ramsey! Loved this and can't wait to read the sequel! :)
WyldeLoneStar chapter 9 . 9/15/2010
after reading this chapter, i say jack is a dick. not sure about ramsey yet. good stuff! i can't stop reading now, lol.
WyldeLoneStar chapter 6 . 9/15/2010
I am finally finding time to do some more reading...Yay! I have to say, this chapter was incredibly frustrating, lol. But, I love this story. :)
Devilish Kisses chapter 2 . 9/13/2010
Devilish Kisses chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
And so it begins...
let.this.go chapter 24 . 8/31/2010
I love this story! The characters and their relationships are great. I had just started reading this story when I first heard Jar of Hearts and it made me think of Jack & Lexi's relationship. I love that song!
fangirl of love chapter 16 . 8/27/2010
I just can't stop reading this! I feel like a crackhead but only for fiction just fyi lol. avoiding commitment sure that's easy but avoiding temptation oh so hard cause it feels just right. However, jack needs to get his shit together hot n cold hot n cold lexy is too fucking sexy for his shit...I been wanting to use that pon alnight! Crap I need sleep but I want to read more i_i
fangirloflove chapter 12 . 8/25/2010
Wow the shit hit the fan in this poor clark
sammi-2688 chapter 25 . 8/2/2010
It's over :O It was an intense ride, eh?

Wow. I really can't wait for the sequel. Here's to hoping that there's going to be a miserable Jack in it (What can I say, I'm a blood thirsty person.)
XxSKYxLARKxX chapter 25 . 7/28/2010
OMG you have no clue how happy I am with this ending!

I absolutely detested Jack's treatment of Lexi and was flabbergasted that she couldn't realize how much of an arsehole he was. Normally I'm a silent reader mainly because I was afraid that all of the bile-ridden, venomous dislike I had for Jack would spew over into my review (well I guess that's moot now).

I kept re-reading the final encounter between Jack and Lexi, just imagining what was going through Jack's mind as he realizes that he's just lost someone who loved him so deeply. Must be crushing, yet at the same time I can't help but think, 'That's what you get you selfish, two-timing d-bag! HAHAHAHAHAHA'. Good for you Lexi for seeing through Jack's BS about the duplicate ring (I can't believe his audacity...what's the point of keeping Lexi's ring if he isn't going to do right by her?).

Though I may hate Bekah and her conniving ways, in the grander scheme of things I believe that she actually does Lexi a favor. Now Alexa can move on and become a stronger, better version of herself and find the love that she actually deserves.

Honestly though, there's still a question mark against Ramsey for me. review(rant?) has run it's course and I must say you are a wonderfully, brilliant writer! You have no I idea how many times I laughed, cried and been frustrated with the characters (to the point of dropping F-bombs on my screen). Your portrayal of emotions and attention to details is so frighteningly amazing that I think I want to bake you cookies..weird? Most definitely.

I can't wait for the sequel!
rebecamontiel chapter 25 . 7/27/2010
Amazing story, and surprisingly. I'm not mad that she didn't end up with someone... sometimes that makes me sad in a story... But this was just so liberating...

Jack will always be crap.

I hate him.

He and Rebekah deserve each other, evil bugs.

And I hope the sequel comes with a fresh start for Lexi, new and amazing things.

Thanks for this story.
rebecamontiel chapter 21 . 7/27/2010

He seemed utterly surprised by this conclusion. "No, baby," he said striding towards her and taking her face between his hands. She didn't even have the energy to push him away. "I just need more time. This was…great, but it doesn't change things. Now I really have to go." And with that he strode out of the hallway and back to his birthday party.


Are you kidding me?

He's the biggest asshole ever.

There's no question about it.
rebecamontiel chapter 8 . 7/27/2010
Jack really is selfish... I'm starting to not like him... at all.
rebecamontiel chapter 6 . 7/27/2010
What do I think of Jack? I think he's a selfish asshole, that's what I think of him. An irresistible one, true, and I know he does have feelings for her. But, come on! It wasn't right when HE was in a relationship, and now, when she is in one and he's free... it's suddenly right? That's one of the most selfish and unfair things I've ever heard/read.

And even though Lex was weak, I'm still proud of her walking away, albeit late, but still. I think I wouldn't have been able to do it. Sometimes that chemistry is just too much for you, it's a magnetic pull, it's easy to say "I just couldn't do it, couldn't turn away"... you always can, in THEORY... but... we humans are just THAT weak...and the pull sometimes is just too strong.

I'm loving this story.

I actually wanted to nominated for skow, but I was too late (I started reading it a couple of hours ago...) I hope someone else did, or I'll just do it on the next round :D

Amazing work, now I have to keep reading.
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