Reviews for Avoiding Commitment
aerina chapter 20 . 6/11/2010
Loved it, as always! I really enjoy reading about Jack and Lexi's past. I think it's great you're switching from present to past each chapter so we'd see what had happened between them and all that jazz. It's nice. Now i'll just have to wait for the present chapter! Can't freaking wait!
CaliBound chapter 20 . 6/10/2010
Awesome chapter as always I love seeing how Jack and Lexi were in the past can't wait to find out what seperatied them...
Sure as the Dawn chapter 20 . 6/10/2010
nice one ;) chapter 20 . 6/10/2010
Oh no! What happened with Jack's interview? Good chapter :) and I can't wait till the next!
channingcaughtfire chapter 19 . 6/4/2010
God! Jack is such an asshole! If they were together in New York, what did he do that made it stop? And that time together was a year and a half ago but him and Bekah have been together for that long? Seems like a fucking lie to me.

If I was Lexi I would be a bit more aggressive about holding Jack to what I said. I have a boyfriend like this, expect where Jack's problems is girl my boy's problems are drugs. You can't trust anything they say because even if its not a straight out lie, there is always a lie in there!

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Is it the last of the flashbacks or are we nowhere close to being done with this story?
Sure as the Dawn chapter 19 . 6/3/2010
I liked this chapter :D I like how Lexi is has conflicting feelings for both Jack and Ramsey. I mean, yeah she does love Jack more but feelings are starting to bloom for Ramsey...or is female intuition? :p ha ha anyway can't wait for more :D
Cupid's Psyche chapter 19 . 6/3/2010
Oh my god! I feel ill for her. I’m serious! My stomach is churning right now. I cannot imagine listening to that conversation. How horrific! And Jack…I’m crossing my fingers that Bekah is lying her ass off. It would make me exceedingly happy to find out that they’ve never even slept together – ever – but, I suppose that’s wishful thinking on my part…and Lexi’s. And the slideshow…it’s so sweet how they’ve been such a big part of each other’s lives. And what’s at the end of it? And where did Jack go? And is he going to leave money and security for his soul mate? I’m DYING! Just so you know. Great chapter by the way – not fluffy at all! And the fight with Chyna – great! Lexi needed all of that said to her! And the fainting was a nice touch. Lol. Can’t wait for more!
CaliBound chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
I loved this chapter but I really want Jack to realise that Lexi is everything to him and I know it's not going to be that easy but I'm excited about whats gonna happen next...
aerina chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
What a love square! I really don't know who'd Lexi end up with. Or who I think she should end up with. That's why I love this story. You're a fantastic writer. Oh, by the way, I love that name Lexi. I was about to call a main character of my next planned story Lexie but with an 'E'. Coincidence? I think so. LOL. :)
sammi-2688 chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
I really like your story. :) Even though it makes my inner half-dead feminist awaken. Grr... someone needs to shake Lexi so hard that her brain rattles. But as someone who's been the non-girlfriend, I understand where she's coming from. 'cause being in that position sucks, and mine was half as intense as her relationship was.

But I think as of this chapter we're moving in a positive direction. Fingers crossed that she finally moves on. chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
This chapter was awesome! And all the other chapters before it too! Can't wait for the next one :D
cosmopolitan chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
loving ramsey with lexi!
misatok123 chapter 19 . 6/2/2010
God, lexi is stupid or what?, yeah he fuck bekah and wants to "be" with her? (Yeah right) and she falls 4 those simple words -.- that's the tipe of woman i hate! i hope jack dies!

i hope she ends with other man-or alone- not with Jack.. he's a Jack-ass xD

i liked it (L
Minzy chapter 18 . 5/28/2010
Wow, I can't believe you don't have more reviews! Your story is awesome, I love how you interchange between past and present. Personally, I don't like Jack. LOL I'm rooting for Ramsey ;) (even though I'm not really feeling his name... XD) But yeah, keep up the great work! I wish I found this story earlier :D
1PitBullGirl chapter 8 . 5/28/2010
nicely written. It does not seem like poor Lex can be in any relationship withouth Jack showing up and ruining it all. Cant wait for more.
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