Reviews for Avoiding Commitment
chewychester chapter 10 . 2/22/2010
You brought steamy to a new level!
ForeverWasteAway chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Okay, I know I said I was going to start reading this about 2 years ago, but I never got round to do it. Until today :D lol. I was right, this story is pretty amazing so far. I don't know how I feel about Jack yet, and Bekah seems like a cow even though she hasn't even been introduced yet.

I really like Chyna and her and Lexi's friendship. The way they met is pretty cute actually.

As I said before, you're a great writer and this story is very well written :)
misatok123 chapter 9 . 2/16/2010
ohh good chap.. i really don't like JACK!. i hate him : xD

go lexi go!..
kikichaka chapter 9 . 2/15/2010
True to your word. Ramsay added to the mix. Awesome writing. i dont know whether to love or hate Jack.
Cupid's Psyche chapter 9 . 2/15/2010
I don’t care if she hears? Asshole! Ugh, watching Jack and Bekah dance was so heartbreaking. Thank god for Ramsey and I am so happy she kissed him with I’m assuming Jack, watching. Serves the jerk right. Sigh. I still want her and Jack together though. But in the meantime…bring on the jealousy! Great chapter! Can’t wait for more!
PeterMoore chapter 9 . 2/15/2010
thanks so much for the update
Cupid's Psyche chapter 8 . 2/13/2010
Oh, Jack, Jack, Jack…what is going on in that pretty little unfaithful head of yours? Hm…poor blind Kate and sweet Clark, they are about to be collateral damage, because as you and I know, two people with that much heat can NOT do the platonic thing. Can’t wait to see how it turns out! And now I have to because I’m all caught up! Sigh…update soon! Again, thanks for the shout out! :D
Cupid's Psyche chapter 6 . 2/13/2010
I cannot believe she pushed him away! True, she didn’t do it right away, but still, that’s some serious will power! You wrote that scene really well – hot, but not pornographic or anything (in my opion at least). I like how she’s echoing his earlier words – maybe she’ll start to understand him a little better. Although we still haven’t met Kate and I have a feeling that’s not gonna be pretty.

I love them and want them work it out…I just have no idea how…
Cupid's Psyche chapter 5 . 2/13/2010
How awful to have to sit and watch someone that you still have feelings for interact with their girlfriend. I am liking Ramsey though (I was totally laughing at their intro)…and anything to make Jack a little jealous is fabulous. Is it horrible that I want her to keep staying at Jack’s place so more “stuff” will happen? ;)
Cupid's Psyche chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
Delicious tension! I love his ‘I know you want me and I want you, so consequences be damned, I’m gonna take you’ attitude. I don’t think I would like it in real life (but then again, maybe I would…), but in fiction…damn, that’s hot! Poor girl. What can you do against chemistry like that? And yeah…I’m seeing the similarities to Thoughtless – great minds think alike, right! ;)
Cupid's Psyche chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
I loved that chapter! I love hearing more about Jack, and the photos bit was great. I really felt for him when he said he got rid of his favorite because it was her favorite (I’m dying to not what happened between these two). The connection they have is so strong; you want them together…even though that would be really, really wrong since she is there to meet the fiancé-to-be and all. Great stuff!
Caroline202 chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
Jack is a total douchelord for me so far...i don't see how she could put up with that crap!
Cupid's Psyche chapter 2 . 2/11/2010
Oh, I’m so in love with pre-ass Jack. Their first meeting was so cute and their carnival “date” was incredibly sweet, and then the building tension – great – until, boom, “oh, by the way…” Jerk! And yet, his girlfriend is not the same one from chapter one that thinks Lexi is a whore…so his philandering isn’t stopping anytime soon. Hm…can’t wait! I love the present/past chapters. I like experiencing the past events in real time, knowing that they aren’t going to necessarily end well…
Cupid's Psyche chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
Love it so far! The first few paragraphs…that’s totally me in the morning! Hehe… Great use of description and dialogue, I’m already getting sucked up in the characters, and I can’t wait to meet Jack and this ‘girlfriend’ (who’s opening a can of worms if you ask me – never ask to meet the exes woman!). Oh, and thank you for La Perla! I had a wonderful ‘The Office’ flashback (which if you missed that marvelous piece of fan fiction, you won’t understand the reference, but it sure made me happy). And since you asked, I did see a couple missed words/typos, but nothing that distracted from the story. Great job!
kikichaka chapter 8 . 2/10/2010
woow! INTENSE is the word. I like their chemistry. I will surely follow this story.
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