Reviews for Avoiding Commitment |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i hate jack.. he's a jerk.. manipulative and argh bastard!.. i hope he ends alone! -.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so for some reason, I just started reading this story from the chapter before this... which wasn't such a hot idea since I had no idea what was going on. I'm going to start reading this from the first chapter now.. screw waiting til you've finished writing it, lol. But I'm about to fall asleep now so I'm just going to end this review here and read chapter one tomorrow when I can actually keep my eyes open for more than five minutes. ps. oh hey Thoughtless shout-out! ;) |
![]() ![]() woow, that was an intense chapter. I really like Jack but i dont think he should've done that to Lexi, he should know by now that she cant resist him and on top of that she had a boyfriend ! I dont know, but i still think they are adorablee. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only like reading completed stories, so I've added you to my alert list so I know when the story's completed :) It looks great so far! I just skimmed over the first and latest chapters and I can't wait to read the rest :) |
![]() ![]() love this, please keep writingg :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like Ramsey he's cool.. i hope she end with him, i don't like jack he's a jerk :S...! keep goiing ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Ramsey. Everything from his name, description, and personality seems interesting. I already kind of like him more than Jack. Bekah seems like a dull character in this chapter, but I'm sure we'll learn more about her soon. Anyways, interested to see what happens next chapter! |
![]() ![]() I really like this storry, well thought out and very creative storylinee. Can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore this story! Although there were a few grammar problems and confusing parts in this story, I really do love it! Lexi, man what can I say, she's like that typical girl who cannot find the right guy even if she tried. Reminds me of...well, me. I totally support her! WOOT WOOT! You haven't really put Jack in the story that much...I mean for present day...he seemed really sweet in this chapter, but I did suspect something about those phone calls during their "moment", but I can't wait for more. So far so good! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() i like this story a lot. very well written and a nice plot, can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() Very Very interesting start. I like it. The story is mature and your writing as well is. Hoping to get an update soon. ~ Kiki |