Reviews for Avoiding Commitment
DA-chen1 chapter 4 . 6/19/2012
Because some other man was calling her with this name.. I think, he understood in this moment, what it meant.

DA-chen1 chapter 3 . 6/19/2012
Great chapter! She is a fool for going back to him every time! He is sexy and all, but he didn't know what to do.. ti commit to her.. sad!

DA-chen1 chapter 2 . 6/18/2012
What an ass! He will lie to her...well?

DA-chen1 chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Great beginning :-) I'm very interested in the rest of your story ;-)

Dn14 chapter 25 . 6/11/2012
Rachel wheeler chapter 24 . 4/25/2012
What? My heart is breaking!
Rachel Wheeler chapter 21 . 4/24/2012
THAT RAT BASTARD! I HaTE JaCK! Ughhh but I'm starting to think Lexi's idea if live is a bit lacking... The drama factor was great!
Rachel Wheeler chapter 14 . 4/24/2012
Not sure what to think... At the current moment I think Jack is a rat bastard & Lexi is acting... Don't know how I feel about her yet.
pam125 chapter 26 . 4/4/2012
Wow what a ride! Thank you!
pam125 chapter 22 . 4/4/2012
Wow talk about a roller coaster! I don't know how they can ever get past that but I hope to find out :) your book is amazing I am completely sucked in any chance you might sell it as an ebook? You should I would definitely buy it and I'm sure many more would too!
OliviaL91 chapter 13 . 4/3/2012
Once again, I loved it. It was perfect. I'm totally crushing on Ramsey. I can't wait to see where Lexi and Ramsey's 'relationship' goes. Goodness, one chapter I'm all "Jack!" and now my brain is totally "Ramsey!" Awesome job!
OliviaL91 chapter 12 . 4/3/2012
I loved the last two chapters. So great, Kyla! I'm loving the Lexi/Jack/Ramsey tension and I can't wait to see how Lexi and Ramsey's date goes. You are doing awesome with keeping both the past and present so interesting and they both demand my attention. When it comes to chapter 12: "I thought you didn't mind me being a little tight" totally had me laughing out loud! I hate that Clark found out, because I didn't want him to get hurt, but I obviously knew it would happen eventually. And I'm guessing Clark lied about Jack telling him? Also, I'm completely dreading the end of Jack and Lexi's past. They are so much fun to read. :)
OliviaL91 chapter 10 . 4/2/2012
Hi Kyla,

After reading multiple times from S.C. Stephens that Avoiding Commitment was the story to read, I finally gave in and I'm so glad I did. Your work is incredible! I know I'm a little late to this party and I was just going to leave feedback when I finished AC but it's so awesome, I thought I'd go ahead and tell you what I'm thinking. :) Wow! You are very talented. I'm so confused. I can't choose. The past or the present? Who do I want Lexi to be with? Who do I want Jack to be with? Should I feel bad that I'm loving Jack and Lexi having their moments, even when they have significant others? This chapter was fantastic! I so badly want to rush from chapter to chapter, but at the same time, to go slowly so I can make the story last as long as possible. I have no construction for you. I would say "Keep doing what you're doing," but obviously you are, so I'm just going to get back to reading. I can't wait to see what happens next!

lovermont chapter 25 . 2/17/2012
This story TOTALLY reminds me of the song "Jar of Hearts"... kind of random, but I heard it on my way home from work yesterday and it made me think of this.
no-ones-puppet chapter 26 . 2/16/2012
So I just finished your story and I loved it but at the same time I got mad at it, cause I really wanted Lexi and Jack together... Lol. Even though they are probably toxic to each other.

Is it weird that the whole time I was reading this story I didn't really see Bekah as a bitch/villain... I just saw her as another girl that had gotten played by Jack... I mean she said some cruel things sure, but so did Lexi so it was ehh... But Jack in my opinion was the real bad guy... Stringing both these girls along. Then of course I read the last few chapters and was all... "oh my god, are you serious... What a freaking skank/slut/bitch... Etc."

Anyways! I really did enjoy the story... And now off to read the sequel.
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