I could actually imagine reading this is a novel. It was amazing! You should seriously consider becoming a writer in the future, you would do a Grand Job! :)

aww!

i LOVED this story alot its wonderful and beautiful in every way... keep writing more of these please! :D

Aw.

Aww, this is cute. c: I like the characters, the Dad made me chuckle. The pretty description at the begining was nice too. Well done.