Reviews for You're Stepping on my Heart
Amber Akasha chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
It may not be Christmas now, but I'll take it as a late gift ;) (though it is a shame it's over. I can see the seeds of a great story in the frozen, snow-covered ground)

And again... amazing. I feel sorry for John, but his brother is so much hotter (and interesting, and hell I love that character!) .

So, merry late Christmas!
cellotape chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
oh no.. poor john :(
c chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
kazoua chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
I am the only one awake, new years day, because i'm a loser and can't stay up past 12:30.

I would actually love to see this story set up in a longer story. You had this really great set up, the beginning and the way the main screwed with both brothers, but it seemed to... disolve? I can't think of a good adjective. Several of the expected points just sorta, iono, disapear.
ilovekarrots chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
I liked.
Caseus chapter 1 . 12/24/2009

Love anyways (: