Reviews for It's Just Acting, Right? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good i can't find any faults :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First. I love the idea of this story. But Wow, that was too fast. Why is Demetrius in Zayne's agents office? Even if they have the same agent it is very unprofessional to allow someone to walk into someone else's meeting. Plus, you don't know who is in the film or play with you until the first read through. What are they shooting? Porn? That is not how they do films. They have scripts and they would have them memorized and know what characters they were playing before they even got there. There are no surprises like that. Why, other than they are rivals for the same movie parts, do they hate each other? You have no back story and have all these people acting like children instead of professionals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, this is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this! Your characters are really interesting. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it already! Update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg thats so cool you joined your 2 stories together ... or is the "script" another story you wrote after? anyways its amazing :D please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet! Write more...they need to have a sex scene. |
![]() ![]() Funny start, can't wait to see what happens between these two. |