Reviews for Christmas at the Bell's |
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![]() ![]() i love it i love it so much Eddie does take it kinda fast (what if Kate hadn't liked him? He would've been kneed "where it counts" AND it would've been caught on video (unless there would never have been mistletoe if she hadn't liked him because sisters) Either way, kissing at only seventeen means that they're probably doomed. I also feel bad for Jordan. He has such terrible taste. But overall, 4.99 stars! Very good story! I am a very chaotic person, so the chaos is very enjoyable. Kate going for the bacon is definitely something I would do. please write more? |
![]() ![]() i love it but don't you think they're going kinda fast~ i'd hug for bacon but NOT kiss no matter what but I do love how chaotic this is |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it just how it is. Maybe you already edited it but I was able to follow all the characters and thought it was short and sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story and the family it would be awesome to read more about all of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this! Really gets you in a Christmas-y mood too. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO AMAZING. I couldn't stop laughing. It's cliched and all, like everything on this site, but it's so much better. I really enjoyed this and I think I've actually favorited almost all of your stories. It's a bit ridiculous. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! this is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it!:)) The family is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I told you to stay in your room for a reason," he said. "I was hungry!" I defended. "So you come in here and kiss Eddie?" "He had bacon," I said, holding it up to show him. I loved this part! Actually this whole thing, both chapters, was great. I love the whole plot, the whole family, and Kate is too hilarious. I think this is my favorite of yours because it makes me laugh out loud! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really funny and a great Christmas story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo! x) Wow, I love this family... extremely cute, I love it! Awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha.. I love this family. WAh. Kate is so weird, she kissed Eddie for bacon (or did she really have an ulterior motive)? Anyways. This story is good. It's realistic, it gives me a warm feeling of family.. and I hate Angel. LOL Happy New Year! Write on! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW I liked this so much. It was adorable and Eddie seems like such a cutie! I love fluff like this it just makes my life. And I TOTALLY would have reviewed earlier but I was out of town for Christmas and therefore only saw this in my inbox a few minutes ago! Good job though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() adorable! cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No actually part one was really good and so was this part. I wish it had been longer though...eh oh well. I am so glad Angel left! |