Scary. Nerve-wrecking... Hope the world doesn't come to this reality soon...

A very well written short story. Posthuman romance is something much better than the lousy baseline human hormone driven crap.

After reading the first chapter, my feeling is that this is it. The story is done.

What am I missing here?

Text is well written, no misspelled words, no awkward sentence structure, and an easy to follow story line.

Hm...this is too easy. Subtle feeling is that the author is setting me up for an unexpected twist of plot, but thus far it has not materialized. Will it be in the next chapter?

_._

Seductive and terrifying at the same time. What happens to free will when every decision has to be unanimous?

I think in a way this is quite disturbing. Though at first it seems a good idea, the thought that he/she lost him/herself if scary... enjoyed this greatly. Really eye-opening.