|Reviews for Christmas Present|
| VirtuallyClever chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
This was interesting and different. I like the concept.
But again, you seem to detatch yourself from the sex scene. I don't know how to explain. It's like you were there inside the guy, and then you moved out from him when it was time for him to have sex.
| PowerWithinTheHeart chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
I absolutely love it. A great Christmas story and a different kind of story you see associated with Christmas :) If I have to be picky the only bit that sort of annoys me is "20 odd years old." I really hate the word "odd" please be specific but otherwise well done! :D