Reviews for Christmas With the Mastersons
Kalilah chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
It's stories like this that makes me wish I had a big family or at least one in the future.

I've never really had issues being an only child, in fact I love the fact I don't have to share anything and I know it's easier on my parents to only have to support one child. Yet when I read stories like this one, I can see how much I'm actually missing out on and make me hope for something similar.

I just love the way you wrote and portrayed the close relationships in the Materson family xD
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
haha cute ! :) i wonder what college lena went to..
F.H.W chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
I love the Masterson series. The guys're all so funny! Awesome one-shot
NeverHeardOfYou chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
This is the millionth time I've read this story but it never gets old. It's just so amazing. :D x
The Imagination Addict chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
hehehe awesome one-shot. i like how every masterson gets "screen time". hey, i could totally imagine your mastersons as the stars of a tv series! i mean, it's so epic (you have SO MANY scenes on them) AND it's ORIGINAL. very UNIQUE, you know? the idea of an entire family of manwhores. of course, it doesn't impart the best of values so it may not be popular with some circles, but i think it has potential as a tv series :)
Brown-Eyed Chocoholic chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
This is an amazing one-shot! :-) I'm happy for Kansas and Brock. I'm sad for River and Fal, though.

Forrest is so cute with Lena. And Danielle and Fletcher are so sweet with each other.

I love Logan's immaturity and his relationship with Crystal. :D

Damn, wish I could have a family like this one day. That would be great.
Dahmun chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
This is a really strange family. Strange yet really interesting. They're easy to relate too which makes things so much easier to read. They're also very fun characters which keeps things exciting.

Also, your writing style is a bit more mature than I expected. I thought you'd be just one of those silly teen girls who wrote like the tv shows nowadays, but man was I wrong.

Good job, miss All Over You.
heartrisk chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Awe, I love this story so much.

I love Fallon and River and there girl daughter, Dannon.

You are an outstanding writer.
Reviewed chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
Story was cute, though almost unbearably cheesy at times. And just a little correction, but you can't actually apply to Yale and Stanford early. Well, not together anyway. They're both SCEA.
AbbeyXD chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
aw that was so cute! I loved it! :)
Astarael-11 chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Aw, so cute, I loved that each Masterson was focused on a wee bit and Danielle as well. We never really get to see her interactions with Fletcher so that was really cute.

Also, poor Fal! She's probably one of my favourite characters although, at least they have Romeo... and Dannon.

But, I loved it and thought it was very sweet. The Masterson boys sure do know how to enjoy themselves... at the expense of ech other :)
akaCHEEKS chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Hahaha. I actually really like this chapter. And I'm guessing the way that Danielle and Fletcher met, they used to hate each other? Since you mentioned something about how River and Fallon's relationship was similar to theirs? Or am I totally hallucinating here?
starlight-angel88 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
sunnybunny17 chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Omg that was terribly cute! I loved it, just like all your stories(: absolutly amazing, indcredible, haha(:

I love cute stories(:

I can't believe there's only one more masterson story:( what a pooey!

~Brooke masterson:D
bwahahaha XD chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I Love with a capital 'L', Love baseball xD
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