Reviews for Magic In The Night
bluewitness chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This piece holds a spectrum of different emotions for me. I could sense his desperation; his feeling of being drowned within his own mind gripped me. I especially loved the line - "Everything was moving so fast but so slow at the same time. It was as if someone had picked up the remote control of his life and put it on slow motion, while fast forwarding it at the same time." ...that really evoked the feeling for me!

The end was an interesting turnaround. Anticlimactic, almost- but I do like what you did with it. I was expecting a bloody death in a car crash, muahaha, but the last line, with those three little words...left me pondering something deeper.

Keep up the good work! :)