|Reviews for Unlucky|
| E.M.O unknown chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
Let's see...it been How long Since you last updated? Hmmmm...about a year or two? Meanie! Don't leave readers hanging!
| Yoona chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
| faiswingedchronicles chapter 4 . 1/9/2010
um well that was fast I was like uhh so another vampier? Or was that a werewolf! hehe Lol he was all like "ouch stop" wahh hehe sure mature.
| Nastusia chapter 3 . 1/1/2010
OH~ Mitsuro is in trouble! :C
BTW, I only left a review cause you asked so nicely~ I'm sorry if there isn't a lot in it. I just don't know what to say! *runs away; crying.
| SailorScoutKai chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
You need to look over your work, capital I's and apostrophes etc. Also, don't use chat speak, it degrades your fiction.
Just a few pointers for you...