Reviews for Alice's Divinorum
eaststar chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
Interesting chapter! Just don't overdo the gruesomeness!
lookingwest chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Hmm...I like how you seem to know what you're talking about in this small chapter, I hope that you've done research or had first hand experience, either way, but to me I don't think I have to worry about it, since I was very convinced by this mystery drug's existence. I didn't quite like your allusions to Alice in Wonderland, because I consider them a little over-used in these types of situations, with drugs, ect. But I did like how you started the chapter off with the reference and ended with it-that was consistent, and even if the allusion was overused, it pulled the chapter together nicely.
eaststar chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
It's really sad how people sometimes make the wrong choices which change their life. Maybe you can add a little authors note at the end adding some facts to make it clear that this changed the narrators life for the bad.