Reviews for Holding on Forever
anonymous chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
good, but...the end was...i dont know. i would chance the last part and your good to go!
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
This is intriguing. Keep writing.
ThePenWrites chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
That was amazing. New at poetry? Jeez you're pro! One thing I'd suggest: write a sequel, or at least add on. Keep writing.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Simple but good. :) Keep practising by writing lots and post more poems soon please! :)

Anna _