Update update update update update! :) :)

Great first chapter, with only minor slip ups which I think were more typing errors than anything. I'm very excited to see how this story is going to turn out after being such an avid reader of your other one. Onto chapter two now... :)

Fantastic 3 chapters as always :). I wish u would stop freaking out about luce... I honestly like everything u write. I'm always thinking of things that I could suggest for u to improve but I can't think of any :) greT work.

You never disapoint. Bravo!

You really have nothing to worry about. Honestly, nothing you can do-at least, writing-wise, could ever dissapoint your readers. Lolz.

I love how you write the dialogue. It has a nice, natural flow to it. Btw, I want Alec for myself :)

AN UPDATE! yay, I'M SO EXCITED! forgive my harry potter-esque capslockyness. i'm just that's happy :)

Deifinitely love this side to Luce!

Can't wait for more!

I wasn't bored at all, in fact, I thought it was simply wonderful.

I would also like to add int the fact that you can count me as on more of your "dedicated followers." I would most certainly buy your book -when- it goes into print.

I like Lucian. He's so... saucy.

WOW! I read Book One and have to say I absolutely loved it, though I'll leave that review for another time.

I know he's not in this chapter, but Alec kind of worries me. He's super cute and everything, but I'm not getting those brotherly vibes from him...

I love Lucien! I think you're doing a fantastic job with him. I think it makes sense for him to be behaving a little as to not frighten Lilith too horribly.

The Moroccan restaurant in this chapter was a good touch also. You're really creative with all these creatures and stuff. I get that some of them are from mythology and legends and other stuff, but the way you describe everything is just really awesome.

And I know this also doesn't really fit into this chapter, but Sorin gives me the creeps. Hah. That is all.

Please update as soon as you can. I really really like it so far and like how you've been keeping up the feel of Book One.

I'm pretty amused that you were worried about this chapter because I was completely not bored. Lucien is such an engaging character, and I'm never bored with chapters he's in. I think Lilith's reactions are also a major part of it; the way she's so unused to what seems normal and their whole give and take is really what makes these chapters so fun for me. Great job.

About the chapter before, I think I mentioned this in a review for the prequel, but Alec really freaks me out. I always get these vibes that he likes Lilith as more than a sister, and it's kind of creepy. Is there something up there or am I totally reading this wrong?...You probably can't tell me that, but that's the feel I get from it so I hope it's supposed to be there. Also, I love how you show Lilith's love for music. You show her dedication to it so beautifully. It made her being disillusioned about the bards' actual talents very effective.

Anyways, fantastic job as always with these two updates. I'm so excited to be reading this story again! Please keep updating, and good luck with getting published. I will be so happy when this is on the shelves (and I'll probably buy a million copies)!

i realy want Lilith to become her wolf

great job

Oh wow! This chapter made me laugh and go aw! at the same time. I wasnt bored or anything. I love Lucian! He's so... Well, I donno the word, but I love him. he's cheeky and mysterious and fun and hot, but also considerate. I wonder when he'll find out that Lilith is engaged? He has to find out sometime... Anyway, great chapter! Cant wait till the next one!

i think you're right a careing luce is a little strange but i think it is more something to get used to as we get to know him better and see the different sides of him...but thats just me...btw *hug* lol