I'm so glad you finally updated your story! I hope there's more to come soon. I'm hooked.

I had a feeling when Sorin's father was the person there that he was going to be Lily's fiance. Ugh! That has got to be so awkward though with what happened with Sorin and Lily those years ago. He seems nice and okay kind of a guy generally speaking, but his age and the situation is too off putting for me to accept. I really want Luce to just sweep in and rescue Lilth, lol. I'm excited to see them interact again next chapter. I also really want to see them uncover each other's dirty little secrets such as who their families are, blah blah blah. I'm just excited for their relationship to grow I guess.

Congrats on the soon-to-be nuptials!

I had this horrible cringing feeling in the first half of the chapter because I realised almost straight away that Nikulai was the husband-to-be. Poor Lily. She's so trapped by her culture and it's sad that she'd do so much for her fathers approval. Is this going to have a happy ending?

Wow this was really good, even though it took a bit of waiting :P It was worth it though! Keep writing please, I check your website heaps to see if there's another chapter! Can't wait to meet the future husband!

It's been so long but well worth the wait. I am adore Rune's character and all of the flashbacks involving Alec. Please update soon! :)

Intense! Awesome! Update soon!

No lie, I seriously just checked your profile the other day to see if you had posted any updates on how writing was coming along and what do you know, I get an email alert saying that you've updated LSGL! I was so ecstatic to read a new chapter! And it was an awesome one. So much action! I can't wait to see the next chapter and meet Lily's husband-to-be; however, I can't wait even more to see what Luce's reaction is should he ever find out that she's betrothed. And then there's Rune. Oh, Rune, you sweet Elf, you. He is just so hard not to love; he's so protective and gentle with Lily. I can't tell which side I like more- the light, sweet, caring side of Rune or the dark, sly, seductive side of Lucien. Speaking of the rockstar bad boy, I hope we get to see a little bit of him next chapter! A little bit of Lucien is just good for my day I guess, lol. ;)

Yeeessss! You finally updated :) You don't know how happy I am that you did. I can't wait for the next chapter.

It has been a while but i'm glad you're still writing. I'd forgotten how much I missed this story and its characters.

Loving the action. Rune is beginning to play a bigger part. And I don't know why but I kinda like Alec reappearing... ;) Good luck with the wedding.

Only two complaints: It was hard to imagine what was happening after they left the shop. Probably because you didn't really describe anything outside the group. And the mirror scene didn't really seem to affect her that much. Was it shock?

Now on to the good stoof:P I'm getting a little bit of a sexist vibe off rune. Maybe it's just because I was readin a book awhile ago where there was a ridicolous amount of different kinds of sexism in the story, so i might be seeing phantom sexismXD But he seems to be very "protect or womenfolk!"

I don't think their Father actually thought Alec could do it. His agression seemed a little bit out of characther. Mind you I haven't really read a scene with him in...ages.

That is a horrible way to end a chapter!

Do you know how anxious I am that you've stopped updating?

Pleeaaase come back to this story! I heart it verry muuuch :)

Et tu, aussi :)

omg! this is so good. iv read your storys for a while now but never commented but now i am. please is even if your still alive, cause with stuff like this you never know why someone is not updating. for all we know you could be six feet under. this is just too good so i hope your not dead.

I love your story! Please write more!

I miss them!

I'm still curious to see if the Spirit Wolves eating humans was propaganda or if it was caused later by vengeful Wolves.

I love the character development of Aislynn throughout the past few chapters. I know the main character is supposed to be the favorite but she and Luce have a greater iceberg quality to them. Also, they are open about their badassery while Lily is still growing into her paws.

Also, I would think that the vampires would smell the spirit wolves' blood with a doggy musk or something that sets them apart. Then again both Wolves are half so its watered down a bit? Just food for thought!

Excellent chapter! I'm excited for the next one!

Hm IDK how I missed this chapter. D: I hope you update this soon! Hands down my most favourite story on FP! I suggest you take the first one down before it gets ripped off. I found several FP stories over on another writers' site, being claimed by other people. -_-

- HT