Reviews for As the Days Pass
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
We complain because of jealousy, because so many people want to be something they're not...

Though. The poem made me think. Your wording is amazing. It created these vivid points and thoughts inside my head.

Amazing work :)
xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
good job.

I really liked the whole idea of this poem.

I totally agree with it.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Nice message.
rockettwriter4 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
can u review my poem? its Just In, called "dreaming".
waitingforwhatever chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
I totally agree, and I think you're poem is good. ;)
anonymous chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
good!