Reviews for Lubbān wa Murr
Rhapsodybywam chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I am loving you so hard right now. Finished Violet and Tom and then I read this and it was funny and awesome and I really love how you write. The way you perverted Christianity in both was in my opinion simply brilliant and I ADORE what you did with the oil in this story I just want to post it everywhere and have my friends try and figure out what it means lol. But anyway, thank you for writing this I've derived a lot of enjoyment out of it. Also, where else do you post your stories that you referenced in your bio? I'm not familiar with it and I really would love to keep reading your work.
Poptart Guava King chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Fantastic. I really like this one. I kept humming the "We Three Kings" song throughout. I'll never think of Christmas the same way again! Thank you! :D
lostrealmsdreams chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Lol, loved it. You write really well, and the story itself was completely enjoyable. -
dearie me chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This is very nice.

It really does a nice job of showing the culture and history accurately.
AHuiyan chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Flames some?

short and satisfying, but some uncomfortable phrases and what could be considered over reliance on cliche. A read through and edit may be helpful at a later date.

Well done overall,

thecakethief chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
wow. this is just... amazing. there wasn't a single grammatical error and the culture was displayed really well without being confusing, and the sex? yum. i loved it, even if its all kinds of blasphemy XD
jillyxoxo chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
i absolutely love the detail you put into tis! awsome and no typos at all! :D
mintyfish chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Really impressive characterisation and sense of setting in something so brief. I'm also impressed by the amount of background knowledge that was necessary to even write it in the first place. The tone, the texture of the language is truly evocative of (English translations of) Arabic texts. You're clearly quite good at changing your style to match your material. Not to mention it was just a flat-out good read. Nice Christmas extra, thanks. :)
SeveRemus chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Ahh! What a wonderful Christmas present!