|Reviews for Love Triangle Between the Two of Us|
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/14/2013
Intriguing & cute story but it's driving me crazy every time you spell follow as fallow! Okay, I'm good again. Onward with the story... :)
| NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
cute. very very cute.
| Reeciez chapter 5 . 11/15/2011
Okay, first of all them title really confuzzled me. Ya can't make a triangle outa two! Then I was all like 'ohhhh, I get it.' Then I was like 'stalker on the lose, run fe yer lives!' An finally I was like awww so cuuuuute! Look at te couple! Really likable a believable plot through the whole thing! ,
| Bookworm24601 chapter 5 . 3/28/2011
He sure does love his chocolate pudding.
| Ben Tramsami chapter 5 . 3/1/2011
This was really sweet. It was great reading your story. I loved every bit of it. (I'm a sucker for dysfunctional relationship fluff) Keep being a great author!
| mewlexi chapter 5 . 10/12/2010
Awe, it seems like i'm always going to start like this every time i read your fics...I love you! x
| Wandering-Recluse chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
I liked this story a lot, it's really interesting and I've never read anything like it on fictionpress. It has an interesting angle with the split personalities. I love how Colin deals with Haru and Haruto as different people.
I think that I would have liked to hear more about Haru's back story, not just a quick overview by his step cousin. Maybe a point of view of his and his dad's relationship through his eyes. That would have been really interesting.
What I would love to read would be a sequel of what's in the notebook as this story goes on and the progression of feelings of Haru and Haruto for Colin and how they interact with each other in this notebook. That would be amazing even if you just thought about it for a minute.
Anyway-just wanted to leave my review (I haven't done it in so long I hope I didn't sound too pathetic.)
| Black Vala chapter 5 . 3/21/2010
so pretty così romantico grande lavoro
| PyroTech chapter 5 . 2/10/2010
I liked this
| Ally chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
Ah, beautiful! I love the characters and how you differ between Haru and Haruto! You have some spelling mistakes or typos, for instance "fallowed" which should be "followed", but it doesn't matter to the story. Keep up the good work!
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 5 . 1/12/2010
Love it! Just one error: "Looking at the boy, he was skinny and pail as if he hadn’t eaten or rested well in several weeks" pail pale. I can't believe it's over - but it finished really well, and I love the sort of 'happy ending' bit at the end - Pudding Cups have been sort of a theme throughout :D Love
| xXxCuriousMimixXx chapter 5 . 1/11/2010
I luv all ur stories they all are very interesting especially this one im sad it ended but just keep writing these amazing stories kk
| Kirie Toshi chapter 4 . 1/9/2010
I've been meaning to read this for the longest time. And now I'm glad I did :D I'm on the edge of my seat after every chapter, and now that I've reached the latest update I can't wait for the next one to come out D:
MAX IS SUCH A CREPER. He scares me a little o-o
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 4 . 1/5/2010
O.O I'm just hoping Colin will see the note and come to Haru's rescue! Love
| ireadtoomanybooks chapter 3 . 1/2/2010
Love it! Poor Haruto :( Just some errors: "Colin rested his head in his hands. He was getting a head ace." head ace headache "An image of Haruto’s sleeping face forced itself into Colin’s mind. Soft curves… fare skin…" fare fair "He fallowed him down the stairs, through the halls, and then outside into the cold." fallowed followed "that I know about you’re… condition?”" you're your... I'm glad that both Nathan and Max are out of the way... *ahem*