Reviews for web
acronyms chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
THIS IS AMAZING! I love this!
letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I like this; it's sort of like she won't be able to help herself...
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
You embody a spider in a believable manner.

Very well-written. I'm arachnophobic, so it gave me chills, haha.

I liked the description line " . ." It added to the poem for me.
steffxnie chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Good metaphors. I really like the expressions. Write more. :)
Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Brilliant analogy. :)