your freaking hilarious! haha, just wanted to say i loved it all most especially the ending (see how much i loved it with the adverb describing the superlative, sorry just had an english exam :P) brilliant stuff :D

I loved it. First chapter, I was going to click the "Next " button...but, then I saw your ending author's note. Bashing on the Lakers? Tsk tsk. But, it was too good of a story to /not/ continue reading. Plus, I was kinda hating the Lakers too, during that season. Yes, I said "that season," because I mean "that season," only.

And then, "They die."

I seriously said outloud, "What the fuck?"

Good thing, I browsed your profile and saw that you did a rewrite. Thank god for that. I'll be reading it on that story instead. :P

what! ur mean... :*(

Pffft. Beautiful ending. Is this why you're re-writing the story? 8D

... WHAT? That's it? That is quite devious of you, killing off the characters like it's nothing.

What the shit?

ah. i love it. expesilly the end. ( sorry for the spelling mistakes )

bulshit

A brilliant deconstruction of the cliché'd fictionpress story, stunning in simplicity and complete in minimalism. There are no words to describe such a thing. It is like staring at a white room, resolving in an infinite array of white pixels, magnified so they bleed across each other, an incomparable collection of white uploading into your brain until there is nothing but perfect static, a white noise murmur overriding everything until death.

The sheer shock of a cocaine bump, ripping through your skull, until everything is slightly wrong, slightly off, utterly reasonable and striking and beautiful. The stars in space, one by one blinking out, as the nine billion names of God are written and explained and the universe is collapsing. This is THE END, and that is all that is and will be and ever can be.

Wtf?

i would just like to say:

i hate you :(

why did you make that the ending :(

lol

Was that the epilogue or the ending?

Haha, true. But it's still a shame we never found out there story:)

Holy schmok! You're not actually going to end it like that are you? I was enjoying it :(