Reviews for My Love You Took
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Oh my god. This is sad and powerful. I felt my eyes watering as I read it. My heart broke and I felt the sense of losing somebody held so close.
Prinnydood02 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I am a 19 year old male and this poem got me choked up. I don't usually get choked up when I read poems. You should be proud of the work on display here.

I did find a few things confusing though:

"Out story to my head" (Is this supposed to be "Our story to my head?" That just fits better with the lines preceding it.)

"Two years from then when we met" (I would omit the "then." It makes for better flow. I had to reread that one line again just to make sure I got it right.)

Other than those two things, this poem was really good. Nice job!
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
aww. this one is so sad :*(.well written. little critique. it flowed so easy your rhythm is a little predictable