Reviews for Burning Ashes
lipleaf chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Wow. I can really feel the raw emotion of the speaker in this poem. This reeks of heartbreak and pain and anger and helplessness at the inability to do anything about it. It's really powerful. I especially like the lines





Starting a new line with every word placed emphasis on each one. Good job. You expressed your feelings well, and even if the reader has never been in the same situation as the speaker, they can still relate to the emotions you describe.
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I can definitely feel the rage in this poem. Very evocative.

only one point:

'With you ups and downs'- your
Porcelain Fey chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Wow...I can feel the emotion off this. Amazing. Nicely done.
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
damn. someone got in touch with rage. passionate. nice work