|Reviews for Pressed Rose Petals|
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
I like the title and this piece overall! Great job. Write on!
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
So tragically beautiful! :)
| perverted.intellectual chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Nice poem. Is that a mistake in line 3: 'lay' instead of 'lays' or is it past tense, because this poem looks to be in present? I think this could be improved with a few more lines to explain as I had to read it three times to fully comphrend what was going on. If you did you could fiddle with the last line too; it doesn't feel like it's keeping in tone since everything else isn't quite said having 'dead' feels a bit blatent. Still, nice poem.
| awanida chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
so sad and great i love it