|Reviews for Out|
| The Random Reader chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
It's amazing! I can't explain it, but it sort of touched me, and I loved it right away. If you could make it longer, I would love to know is this girl stays in her happy dream, or if her bubble bursts. It is very, very, good, for such a short piece.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
"I want to last in this dream." - i liked that line. :)