|Reviews for betrayal at its finest|
| xmovedx chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
another amazing one. (i wish i could leave better reviews, but i legitimately can't think of anything to say. and also, i'm not the best reviewer in the first place, because i tend to see poetry as difficult to improve as a general rule.) anyway, as i said, this is wonderful.
| Mirabella chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Amazing and strong! Brilliant imagery!
"(because the needle of a compass
isn't any good when it's
mending the pieces of a broken heart.)" - my favourite part!
| Keller Octavia chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Completly amazing. Good work D