Reviews for Scent
SecretSmiles chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
This was really nicely written :-) Thank you - I loved the descriptions!
Negasi chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
"This was where the German waitress smelled of smoke." For some reason I really like this at the end because it gives your already soothing writing a very down to earth pull it all together feel.
thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
There was some inconsistency in verb tense, and you used the word "we," but other than that, a pretty good story.

I don't think I've ever found an actual excuse to critique your writing before.

Miss you much.