You are hilarious! Seriously, I will have to read this later but legit laughing out loud at that 'knifing' phase! I love dry humour and I have a feeling your story is going to be amazing. I wish I had stumbled upon it earlier in my weekend :I
Will be back!

Great story.

This fake ending reminds me of those sad Korean soaps where the main protagonists die. That was just cruel.

What the guys did, especially Caleb was downright ugly. They deserve those injuries. Though I cant figure out why Tiff and Ella had to suffer.

Fascinating and fantastic.

Ch2 and already loving it.

THIS. THIS STORY THOUGH.
I will definitely come back to reread this.
Thank you so much for writing this amazing story.

holy crap

This chapter being strangely intense so far. I'd like to say more but that will negate my feelings after reading it. I wish you publish your own book soon.
Val

Im not usually reading het pairing but I must admit you write an exceptionally interesting story. Cant wait to read the rest. You make my day with me having suppermassive flu attack.
have a good day

real cute :-)

real cute hahaha

witty funny first chap

this was fucking epic. it started off without a clear plot, but then things started getting dangerous, and while i didnt like the people-are-dying-and-getting-hurt parts, I liked the adventure-ish parts. my type of stories are romantic adventure thingies, i still need to sort out a name.

i think the characters made some personal developement, the boys becoming non-assholes and the girls more open to the boys. then Stefan was hilarious, in this case he acted as the double-trouble team on his own (a difficult feat) and it was just awesome.

also, ive made some progress in mot using the word 'awesome' as much, i think...

seriously, you have made some big progress as a writer too. you mangae to create a setting from scratch-something im absolute shit at myself-which is not easy.

all in all, epic.

even though novody uses that word anymore :)

im gonna read the sequel later today, but seeing as its 0.25 and i have xactly 6 hours before my alarm goes off again aaand its a long day of school... six page essay, whole family tree, essay again, and only two days in the whole week when i do not have any activities... fml.

you complete fuck. i was like why the hell does he have a gun, he is suicidal and then oh yaay they finally got together then i was all oh shit she shot herself and to top it off i was like NOOOOO! THEYRE DEAD! and then you come in all trolling, you complete bitch.

holy cow you scared me.

BTW, when I call you those names,, its only because im angry at you for making my heart die a little when they STILL arent together...