Ellie is mean in this one to Ryan. POOR RYAN! You can sleep in my tent!

So Ryan DOES love Ellie! EPIC! But I saw it miles off. Like, chapter 2 or 3 when he defended her.

NICE TRY! And love the change of perspective.

You - my dear writer friend - have a SICK MIND! How could you subject Ellie and Tiff to such tourture? SHAME ON YOU!

PS. I will be reviewing every chapter, so YAY FOR YOU!

Lol! PARTY PATROL TO THE RESCUE!

Love the knock and yell technique. And the sticky notes just top it off. I should do that next time.

HEHEHE! Where can I find my own Stefan? I need one for Christmas!

AW! Ryan DOES have a sweetie side. CUTE! I just wanna snuggle up with him and . . . . -FILL THE BLANK!-

Epic way you showed they both put alca-ma-hole into the punch. YAY!

YAY! The fun begins! I love how you put fun little flashbacks into the plot.

But I do have to say, it does confuse me sometimes when I finish a flash back chapter and then forget what happened before it.

KIT! IS! MY! NEW! GOD!

ALL HAIL KIT'S EPIC AWESOMENESS!

Damn bad sexual inuendo at the end, but I laughed - mainly because I understood it straight away! (That's just WRONG that I did. SHAME ON ME!)

Sarcasm is the best form of humor - I use it all the time, people don't know if I'm being real or not. XD

I LOVE THE NEIGHBOURS! What good story doesn't have atleast ONE gay guy? It's like a prerequisite.

Can't say I'm surprised at Tiff, but what can you do? Tiff is a wild beast, and Ellie is her tamer - sometimes.

YAY FOR UNDERAGE DRINKING! (Not really. Don't try it at home kids!)

I love coincidental moments that just piss people off. Like they just HAD to be in the vacant spot next to them. LOVING IT! Can't wait to continue.

Loved the flash back moments into the 'glamourous' lives of Tiff and Ellie. HAHA! Nudist beach. YAY!

O_O . . . . Dayum. I think I just turned lesbian for Tiff. LOL! (Joking)

It was sort of an info dump, but it didn't seriously hinder the story flow - maybe a little bit.

Can't wait to see who the rude jerks are.

Epic and cute. Perfect combination of interest and mystery, along with some laughs. Good job.

Now, when you say the Cambodian jungles, do you mean Kampong Speu? I'm asking this because I live here and I'm curious as to which one you're referring to.

Good story, and I like that you edited the prologue; I'd read it before the edit and this time,it flows a little bit more.

Good job and keep it up. I like your story, and I've been reading it for a while, it's just that I have been really too lazy to review.

PS. I love how you've mentioned Cambodia. VIVA LA KAMPUCHEA! This country just doesn't get its fair share of the limelight; of course what happened recently there isn't exactly all that good.

PPS. Foreign foresters? Here in Cambodia...a little off, if I may say so.